I agree it's too long - if you want it long I think it needs to build more.
Compare to the Bruckheimer one where we get about 6-7 seconds of motion creating anticipation, then it resolves to the company name which holds for about 5 seconds. You already have the name on screen from the start, so we're just kind of staring at that for the entire 15 seconds.
And I personally don't like the movement of the main title text - it kind of looks like a mistake, as the text distorts oddly and the movement doesn't really contribute anything to the name or logo itself. It feels like you're trying to fill time by adding in extraneous animation.
So I'd say cut it in half and change the motion to something simpler that contributes to the build - maybe instead of just fading the text in have it fade & drop back from closer to the screen, as if it's moving backwards into space.
Compare to the Bruckheimer one where we get about 6-7 seconds of motion creating anticipation, then it resolves to the company name which holds for about 5 seconds. You already have the name on screen from the start, so we're just kind of staring at that for the entire 15 seconds.
And I personally don't like the movement of the main title text - it kind of looks like a mistake, as the text distorts oddly and the movement doesn't really contribute anything to the name or logo itself. It feels like you're trying to fill time by adding in extraneous animation.
So I'd say cut it in half and change the motion to something simpler that contributes to the build - maybe instead of just fading the text in have it fade & drop back from closer to the screen, as if it's moving backwards into space.