archived-videos Very very very very short title sequence

[joshythehipster]

Hey all,

I made a very very very short title sequence for my little sister, as I suggested she should show her tattoo style art on youtube videos, and I said I'd help with the filming and editing side.

What do you think to this sequence?

Title sequence


Josh

P.S - Hope you're all having a sexy summer in the Northern Hemisphere, and a sexy winter in the Southern one (I think that's how it works... :s )

 

[NickClapper]

I think it's good. My only suggestion would be raising the 'Road to Tattoo' text a little higher so that it doesn't catch on the belly button, which is a little bit darker (making it hard to read in the wide).

 

[Cracker Funk]

I would adjust the white-balance. Otherwise, I think it's fine. If anything, you can cut it by just a little bit, the beginning is too long.

Looks nice. Good job.

 

[Zensteve]

Looks good,