archived-videos Very Short Film

[JFP]

Hey guys here's our newest short, it's called "Expletive Deleted" watch it and let me know what you think and if you understand the title. Thanks.

New Short - Expletive Deleted

 

[Ziggy]

I really like it. Clean and simple execution, smile inducing punchline. Well done.

 

[JFP]

I really like it. Clean and simple execution, smile inducing punchline. Well done.

Thanks for watching and I appreciate the kind words.

 

[Ernest Worthing]

It's a nice little short.

Imho, it could've been cut a little tighter and been shorter for what it was.

But nice work, overall

 

[JFP]

It's a nice little short.

Imho, it could've been cut a little tighter and been shorter for what it was.

But nice work, overall

Yeah, I think we could have cut it shorter. What we had for coverage made it a little tough though. Thanks for taking the time to watch and give us some criticism.

 

[HedgesPictures]

I concur with the earlier comments.

Nice music selection.

 

[Kosh]

Very nice, very nice. I liked it.

 

[JFP]

Thanks for all of the nice feedback everybody.