archived-videos Trailer for 'Sailing With Aquaphobia' ! - feedback appreciated!

http://www.vimeo.com/28176106

Writer, Director, Editor, Producer, Actor, and Co-Cinematographer: M. Patrick Heywood.

Camera: Canon 60D
Lenses: Canon 50mm 1.8, Canon 24mm 2.8
Audio: Rode Videomic and H4n Zoom
Editing: Adobe Premiere Pro 5.5
Tripod/Other Equipment: Manfrotto 701HDV; Cowboy Shoulder Mount; Lensfinder

The debut film of Morning After Pictures tells the story of a twenty year-old guy, Liam Maguire, who's recently realized he's done absolutely nothing with his life. After reading a book by Hal Roth, he becomes inspired and decides that he is going to sail around the world. There's just one problem: Liam has Aquaphobia (the fear of water). A comedy about the things we do for ourselves, those around us, and what happens when we break out of our shells.

A full length trailer will be released sometime in October. The full short film 'Sailing With Aquaphobia' will be released in the winter. Watch in HD and Enjoy!

Any feedback, complimentary or constructive is totally welcome.

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I really enjoyed the trailer. It was well shot and cut. Sure there's some audio issues, mainly the two voices at once, narrator and singer but I really liked it. Looking forward to the final piece. :)
 
Aweome trailer. I don't have that much experience yet but the trailer does visually please me very much. And you did some pretty decent lighting / color correction there? Kind of looks like a feature to me.

Wanted to ask a question, at first when he's writing that letter and you're moving fastly from one close up shot to another, these are all rough cuts, correct?

One more question. I'm pretty dumb when it comes to lenses so if I may ask, what was the use of the two lenses?

Thanks. :)
 
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