Hey guys, check out my first short film. Please tell me what you like and don't like about it. Thanks.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Urtn9j-RAxs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Urtn9j-RAxs
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archived-videos The Hot Seat | A Short Film
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From the start:
The opening title was good, looked great the sound was there, in your face.
I turned my speakers down (my kids are in bed) but then had to turn them up so I could hear the rest of the film, there were a couple of patches where the actor took a step towards the window and the sound dipped.
the music was good through the whole short, the idea itself is good.
but in general I liked it.
The opening title was good, looked great the sound was there, in your face.
I turned my speakers down (my kids are in bed) but then had to turn them up so I could hear the rest of the film, there were a couple of patches where the actor took a step towards the window and the sound dipped.
the music was good through the whole short, the idea itself is good.
but in general I liked it.
Lol, that's encouraging man, thanks. I assure you it is my first. I have only been involved in visual effects at a professional level.
haha oh ok. Well then you got really nice potential!
Sorry btw didn't mean for my previous comment to come off nasty like i think it did.
We sometimes keep ourselves in bondage while telling ourselves we are good for nothing. At the end of the day your are gonna have to make the choice to listen to your dark side or conquer it.
Great piece man. Really enjoyed the mood the music and the cuts put me into. As some noted there were moments where the levels of the voice jumped a bit with the image cuts, but nothing drastic. And I really liked the pace of it.
Thanks everyone. Very good critiques and definitely appreciate all the nice comments. I'm looking forward to showing what I have next.
Hope you enjoyed though.
Oh absolutely, I love watching what people come up with here.
I thought it was more on the experimental side, I 'spose.
Cool! Already shot, or planned for next shoot?
Cool! Already shot, or planned for next shoot?
We are in the writing stages for a web series. Hopefully we can raise enough money to get some professional equipment.
Superb stuff, good little idea, great twist, great look, very impressive first short. Hope mine turns out as effective.
He thanks you.
Thank you for the nice comments, looking forward to what you can produce bro. Just know we actually had a reshoot for ours. The first time didn't really work, but we learned from our own mistakes and got it right.