watch The Girl in the Photograph (v2)

[charlie95148]

Hello! A while ago I posted my short film based on the CreepyPasta "The Girl in the Photograph". I've edited the movie based off of the response I received, and made the pacing far brisker. Thoughts?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=anCPmNQDJVU

 

[Zensteve]

Original thread was here, btw:
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=40167

Edit's much tighter than before. Wish you'd left the older cut there for a before/after comparison, but oh well

What's next on your film plate?

 

[charlie95148]

Original thread was here, btw:
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=40167

Edit's much tighter than before. Wish you'd left the older cut there for a before/after comparison, but oh well

What's next on your film plate?

I took a cue from Stanley Kubrick burning the deleted ending of "The Shining" and chose to remove the inferior rendition from the eyes of the public

I'm thinking my next short film will be an episode of "Candle Cove", also a favorite CreepyPasta of mine