Hello All!
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first dialogue "Scene" I've written, and perhaps give me some constructive critisism?
I am aware that the format might not be correct, and the action may be low, but I was really trying to make this scene dialoque heavy, to see if I could write a dialoque that flows naturally.
Also, I can't figure out how to upload the document from my computer, so a little help would be most welcome
Thanks in advance
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first dialogue "Scene" I've written, and perhaps give me some constructive critisism?
I am aware that the format might not be correct, and the action may be low, but I was really trying to make this scene dialoque heavy, to see if I could write a dialoque that flows naturally.
Also, I can't figure out how to upload the document from my computer, so a little help would be most welcome

Thanks in advance
