archived-videos The Camera

sfoster said:
Very difficult to watch. It's shaky in a bad way, and terribly overexposed.
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Firstly, congrats on completing a vid. This is more than most people do.

However, in terms of criticism I entirely agree with SFoster. Framing, angles weren't great, very difficult to watch due to the shakiness.

Story didn't do it for me and it needs something to engage.

Good luck with your next project!
 
Nice work! The music is fitting, there's a consistent style, and enough going on to keep the audience from being bored. It's more condensed and watchable than some of your previous content. That's not an insult, but I want to gladly point out that your stuff is getting better. Also, the POV shot was cool.

I can't stress the two posts above enough though. Incredibly shaky and hard to look at. I recommend you learn more about exposure, stabilizing the camera in the future, and learning about different angles/techniques.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kD8nXGt91yo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZP0YbwlHK0U
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYPrtXZ7HVE
 
gorillaonabike said:
Firstly, congrats on completing a vid. This is more than most people do.

However, in terms of criticism I entirely agree with SFoster. Framing, angles weren't great, very difficult to watch due to the shakiness.

Story didn't do it for me and it needs something to engage.

Good luck with your next project!
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Again thanks for the feedback. next video we shoot we will be shooting it a lot better (mind you shakiness did give it the silent film style)
 
ChimpPhobiaFilms said:
Nice work! The music is fitting, there's a consistent style, and enough going on to keep the audience from being bored. It's more condensed and watchable than some of your previous content. That's not an insult, but I want to gladly point out that your stuff is getting better. Also, the POV shot was cool.

I can't stress the two posts above enough though. Incredibly shaky and hard to look at. I recommend you learn more about exposure, stabilizing the camera in the future, and learning about different angles/techniques.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kD8nXGt91yo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZP0YbwlHK0U
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYPrtXZ7HVE
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Thankyou. very much. That ment a lot We shoot this went we were not experinced . Origanlly i didnt think it could be slavged into i looked at it this year. Me and my freind havent been able to get togethere agoan so im doing videos useing old footage, next videos going to have shaky shots , but if we make new movie after that , where definatly not doing it hand held and watching lighting , angels etc
 
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