Nice job. I like it. Generally speaking, I think you have a good eye, for knowing where to put the camera. I'd like to see how you shoot and edit a scene of continuous action, however.
What you've basically got here is a musical montage. And for the most part, it works well. The times that it doesn't work so well is when you suddenly switch into narrative mode, occasionally showing continuous action. You don't need to do that. We don't need to see him walking into the house, and through the hallway, then opening the door.
You could cut a whole lot of this video, turn it into a proper musical montage, and it would have much more zip.