archived-videos The Balloon - A Short Film

blacksnowproductions · Nov 7, 2010

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lvK0QovP5XY

Hope you guys enjoy. Give me some good feedback so that I can make these films better

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Thanks again!

Murdock · Nov 13, 2010

Pretty good man.

reminds me of this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BaGELtPUgyE&feature=related

dainbreadfilms · Nov 13, 2010

only thing I could say is maybe do some ADR and foley and get the june bug noise out of the background. It kinda made it hard for me to follow the actors lines, because i was distracted by it. Other than that pretty good

bigBiscuit728 · Nov 13, 2010

Hahahaha I wasn't expecting that lol. It was good, but yeah if you could get the bug (that's what I think it is) noise out of the background it would help. But otherwise good.

M1chae1 · Nov 13, 2010

The end floating up scenes are cool. Nice vibe.

Pretty competent filmmaking...I wasn't a fan of the sound obviously.

The actors were a tad flat and amateur...but it's not a big deal for a piece like this.

Good work thus far. Keep it up.

IndieBudget · Nov 13, 2010

Great little vid, very entertaining. Now make 10 more !

Show the world how creative you are

Papertwinproductions · Nov 13, 2010

Some nice imagery, again as mentioned the acting wasn't great. But it wasn't a problem.

Alcove Audio · Nov 13, 2010

Definitely needs some serious sound FX and Foley work, may be a little music.

blacksnowproductions · Nov 22, 2010

IndieBudget said:
Great little vid, very entertaining. Now make 10 more !

Show the world how creative you are

Don't worry, I plan on doing so. Thanks again for all the feedback guys. I will try to get you guys some new video's soon