This is a simple ODD little short I'm hoping to shoot in December. Wanted something that'd be moderatly easy for practice but at the same time different.
Would love any and all feedback on character, ending, other possible scenarios.
And who likes the title? Too odd? Suggestions there aswell.
Thanks in advance guys!
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HRBEWTUR
http://www.ravishare.com/o0a6v44gwkfb/Takes_Off_His_Flannel_Shirt_And_Kills_A_Baby.pdf.html
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...OWRkZC00MTFhLWE2ZDktZTMyZjFmNjU5ZTQw&hl=en_US
Tell me if the links arent working.
Would love any and all feedback on character, ending, other possible scenarios.
And who likes the title? Too odd? Suggestions there aswell.
Thanks in advance guys!
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=HRBEWTUR
http://www.ravishare.com/o0a6v44gwkfb/Takes_Off_His_Flannel_Shirt_And_Kills_A_Baby.pdf.html
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...OWRkZC00MTFhLWE2ZDktZTMyZjFmNjU5ZTQw&hl=en_US
Tell me if the links arent working.