archived-videos Stop Motion Short Film: Exit

[Jayisafunnyman]

Hello Everyone!
Thank you for allowing me to post my work.

This was a very short film that we had to shoot during class hours (2hrs) on campus.
The assignment was to only use still images to tell a story.

This is normally not my type of style so any constructive criticism is appreciated.

Enjoy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6YORDIOmNKw

Run-time: 56 seconds.
Edited using Adobe Premiere Pro CS6
Camera: Canon 7D on Burst

 

[letsmakeamovie6]

Not bad but where was the stop motion, I feel like i could see stops sometimes but I guess I missed it lol

 

[Jayisafunnyman]

Thanks for taking a look at my short!

I agree it doesn't look like a typical stop motion film.

That's because I sped it up in post so that it will be less than a minute.
My professor didn't want it over a minute lol.

 

[Zensteve]

Ending was pretty weak, but dug the overall style & tone.

 

[Jayisafunnyman]

Yeah the ending got mixed reviews in my showing in class, some liked it, some didn't.
However, I appreciate your genuine feedback!