watch Something different :)

[LukasDiSparrow]

Hey guys! I have made 8 minute short film for competition... it's not best as I haven't done any film school and just learn as I film... so I need your feedback? could you please tell me what you think and what you like and dislike? so I can take it for consideration in future?

Thank You!

please watch
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Np0X8VHXQLM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Np0X8VHXQLM

 

[Cracker Funk]

I think you'd benefit by picking up the pace, both in the performances, and in the edit. Best of luck in the competition!

 

[Powerkicker]

I enjoyed this one. The camera work wasn't so jumpy as the last one. The story was interesting and funny to me.

I think the long black walk from the bed to turn on the light was a bit drawn out and over dark. Some of the lighting was throwing odd shadows in the office scene as well.

I think this was a good effort. I truly wanted to see the ending. I actually cared about the characters. That's half the battle.

 

[joey1320]

Funny story and acting. As Cracker said, I think you could had sped up the sequence but it was still a cool short