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action Screenplay of action scene

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krishnasarma

After a while, I am working on a short film (action genre). I have never wrote anything on these lines before. Any suggestions/reviews please.

Yeah, with a quick glance, it has lengthy descriptions. I am working on that too.
 

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It's not bad! I think there are some good beats in here, and I think you are on a good track with showing the protagonist get exhausted during the fight. It makes it more human and interesting than the standard action star with limitless energy. I'm not a technical scriptwriter, so maybe others can give you more feedback on those aspects.
 
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