archived-videos RUN! 2

I watched the 2nd one and it just shows some guy running through a field for 2 minutes. The audio: a rock track...

What's the point of that? Why do you want feedback when it's just some guy running through a field for 2 minutes...

Note: You should probably watch in order.
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Why? The 1st one seems to show exactly the same thing - except he's running on a road.

My feedback: give us a short with a story. You did post on the 'Narrative' section after all.
 
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photon said:
I think the joke is that there is no point:lol:.
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Well to do well at festivals you need more than this.

Did I find it funny? Nope. :grumpy:

Update: This is by the same OP. This I found funny:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SaOgTDTvCAM
 
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IndiePaul said:
I watched the 2nd one and it just shows some guy running through a field for 2 minutes. The audio: a rock track...

What's the point of that? Why do you want feedback when it's just some guy running through a field for 2 minutes...



Why? The 1st one seems to show exactly the same thing - except he's running on a road.

My feedback: give us a short with a story. You did post on the 'Narrative' section after all.
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Thing is, you don't know where he's running or why he's running. That's the point. And you'll find out those things in the third one.
 
IndiePaul said:
Well to do well at festivals you need more than this.

Did I find it funny? Nope. :grumpy:

Update: This is by the same OP. This I found funny:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SaOgTDTvCAM
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Lol. I would never submit something like this to a fest. Ever. I just shot this for fun. What in that do you not get?
 
skeblik said:
Thing is, you don't know where he's running or why he's running. That's the point. And you'll find out those things in the third one.
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But no offense it's so boring. It killed me watching it. I watched it to help, thinking there might be something at the end, a reveal or something. But no there wasn't. And the rock soundtrack - aghhhh.

skeblik said:
Lol. I would never submit something like this to a fest. Ever. I just shot this for fun. What in that do you not get?
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No, I enjoyed the salesman video.

The:
Well to do well at festivals you need more than this.

Did I find it funny? Nope.
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... was referring to your Run video and my reply to photon's post.
 
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I feel inspired to make a trilogy of something meaninful, like "Left The Camera Turned On In The Front Seat Of My Car!"
 
I think this would be much more enjoyable if you put the trilogy into one video, cut it down, and had a narration hinting at what he is running towards. Suspenseful music, followed by an intense reveal. Just a suggestion though :)
 
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