archived-videos Psychological Horror short film (19 min) - I would appreciate feedback/questions

Hi guys, I’m in the final stages of edits of my new short film NO MORE FORGIVENESS. It was filmed on a Nikon D600

The total, money wise, was about $150 dollars (food money). We were able to get all locations for free including the Gwinnett County jail, Bar, Schlotsky’s, Suwanee City Hall, and the cars (Porsche 911 and two Lexus’ from a local car dealership) Anyways

I hope you enjoy it and would appreciate any feedback or questions as I still have time before the premiere to make changes.

Running time: 19 minutes

Which will be online temporarily for festival reasons.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NAx5hrTU6Gs

Note: we are replacing one small 4-5 second scene that will be replaced a 3D modal of the baby (with a ghost looking baby) in the Schlotsky’s scene and will update the film when we make some of the recommended changes.

Synopsis:
NO MORE FORGIVENESS is about a husband who is confronted by the spirit of his family. Through pain, insanity, and redemption, he learns that forgiveness is sometimes the hardest thing in the world to get.
 
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Thanks guys. I'm forwarding your suggestions to my editor. I tell you what I'm also struggling with...The trailer. I have no clue.

Do you guys also write a trailer script before filming? Any suggsetions on what I should show with the trailer? Thanks.

Watch as many trailers of films like yours, and look at the editing, style, and structure of those trailers. Copy those trailers. Grab their attention as soon as possible, hold it there, and end strong. Remember: a trailer is an advertisement!
 
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