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watch Please see trailer for my Indie Feature "Serial Killer in Harlem"

Welcome to indietalk.

A few thoughts: Using the MPAA gives the impression you have had
your movie rated by that organization. Have you?

It's too long. That repeated piano gets on my nerves – and not in a
good way. If the trailer was around 90 seconds the repeat might
set me on edge in a good way.

It's topical and your theme comes across well. I would go see that movie.
 
Welcome to indietalk.

A few thoughts: Using the MPAA gives the impression you have had
your movie rated by that organization. Have you?

It's too long. That repeated piano gets on my nerves – and not in a
good way. If the trailer was around 90 seconds the repeat might
set me on edge in a good way.

It's topical and your theme comes across well. I would go see that movie.

hey, thanks for the kind words and critiques. I will consider them.
 
The film looks really good!
The trailer just needs to be tightened up. Each "scene" tends to hang on either a look/reaction or a line too long... tighten all that up. And don't end on humor. You can keep that in the film but in the end, where they say "Gentrification" (that's a "duh" moment that's almost comedic) and how rents go down, the character says "maybe I can get one too," take that out. It might be a funny line for the film but it changes the mood of the trailer from suspense to comedy. Leave it with suspense... where they talk about the racial killings but still wonder why, don't have that "duh" moment and what follows.
 
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