Please critique my work

[friera]

Hi, I am new in this forum and would like to hear any comments and suggestions.

http://vimeo.com/9821026

http://vimeo.com/9486537

Thanks

 

[TheMurph]

Well, "LIHIM" seemed pretty good. I'm not really a good judge when it comes to music videos however.

I thought "Annabelle" looked real good, but was it meant to have no sound?

 

[Feutus Lapdance]

Agreed...I loved Annabelle as wel. The licht of the last hal seen was realy good. Shower schene and stairway scene.....realy good shots.

 

[friera]

"Annabelle" was the first thing I did when I got my first super 8 camera. It was an attempt to do a lighting exercise,
shot to edit on camera and at the same time do a camera test.

Thanks guys, I appreciate the feedback.

 

[msp1518]

Love Annabelle as well. You should update with a soundtrack.

 

[Feutus Lapdance]

Wel jou could make..... Pi 2...

 

[Wilbs23]

The music video was interesting. But the bands audio could be better.. But good work.