Hey guys, i'm new here so sorry if I'm not following appropriate customs. Was just hoping that somebody could give me some feedback on my comedy tv script? It's not a final polish so just really looking for any comments on like the first 5-10 pages, and specifically the dialogue. Extremely appreciative for any help people may be able to provide.
Thanks
http://www.docdroid.net/rc0r/kid-life-crisis-3.pdf.html
Thanks
http://www.docdroid.net/rc0r/kid-life-crisis-3.pdf.html