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Jake notices the photograph while he fixes the drink.
JAKE
That your grandkid or somethin’?--If you don’t mind me askin’.
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John lets the photograph drop to the bar as Jake pushes the whiskey to his waiting claw. He downs half.
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Jake’s index finger makes circles over the photograph.
JAKE
I’ll be happy when we get back to normal, you know...
John doesn’t try to humor Jake. His gaze is fixed to the
mirror.
...Time was this stuff wasn’t happenin’. Seems like forever since, though.
JAKE
I’ll be happy when we get back to normal, you know...
John doesn’t try to humor Jake. His gaze is fixed to the
mirror.
JAKE (Cont'd.)
...Time was this stuff wasn’t happenin’. Seems like forever since, though.
I like the development but I got really confused.