archived-videos Noir short - trailer

[ngoforth]

Here's the trailer for a short film noir called "Web of Lies". The 40-second trailer itself was an experiment to see if I could create a compelling trailer for a film without giving away the whole plot -- though the film itself is only ten minutes long. Comments appreciated.

"Web of Lies" trailer on Vimeo

 

[Jack Lynt]

Looks nice. I'd like to see the whole film.

 

[PaulGriffith]

Yeah I love the 40's feel to it. Would be nice to see the whole thing.

It's reminiscent of vintage/classic trailers from decades ago, but if the audio ambience was the same from clip to clip I think it would flow better. It's a little jarring hearing noise-clean-lightnoise-wind-clean etc..

Overall, looks nice.