archived-videos Night - Horror Short Film

[MasMash]

Hey everyone, I'm a 16 year old filmmaker and I've just made a solo short film called "Night". I'd love some feedback so I can continue to improve and become a better filmmaker. Thanks!
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJZ3DSPa5wk

 

[Filmer]

Hey everyone, I'm a 16 year old filmmaker and I've just made a solo short film called "Night". I'd love some feedback so I can continue to improve and become a better filmmaker. Thanks!
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJZ3DSPa5wk

Good Sound Effects Added.I would like to see a shadowy figure than the cartoon eyes in the climax though.That'd bring up the intensity a bit more.

 

[MasMash]

Thanks for the feedback. I would have to agree.

 

[Preston Hashagen]

Good job. I'd have to agree about the cartoony eyes but overall a good job. If you have after effects, look into some tutorials and such to up your fx game. Once you get a helping hand and get get off tripod shots your films will look even better. Handheld and horror go together well as long as you don't go crazy with shaky cam.

 

[Murdock]

Be careful with the Foley stuff. For example: The door creaks shut, but he doesn't react until in closes completely. So, does that creaking sound add or take away from the scene?