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New Member - Critique please

Hi all!!

Im a new member here and wanted some opinions/views/critique on a film i made. Im actually a Graphic Design student who hasnt made many films before, in fact this was my second ever. Our brief was to portray unconditional love in 30 seconds, this is what i came up with

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qw_49U4R8M0

If you could possibly leave your comments on the youtube video that would be amazing

Cheers guys

Ricky
 
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