Ok, so I'm developing my Logline and title, I've narrowed it down now to this:
Title: The Chorus Of War
Logline: Aspiring singer, John Scott, is drafted to fight in WWII; where he must adapt or die.
Is the logline too short? Maybe "Aspiring singer, John Scott, is launched in to unfamiliar territory when he is drafted to fight in WWII, where he must learn to adapt or die."
Also what do you all think of the title? I personally really like it, but then again, I would.
All opinions and input appreciated.
Title: The Chorus Of War
Logline: Aspiring singer, John Scott, is drafted to fight in WWII; where he must adapt or die.
Is the logline too short? Maybe "Aspiring singer, John Scott, is launched in to unfamiliar territory when he is drafted to fight in WWII, where he must learn to adapt or die."
Also what do you all think of the title? I personally really like it, but then again, I would.
All opinions and input appreciated.