My screenplay Sample

[Quality]

Hey everyone, here I have for you 12 pages of my latest screenplay, The Singularity. Please review for criticism.

https://1drv.ms/b/s!Aj_aH5XahU1-gQDHthz8sCEEMudm

 

[UneducatedFan]

Hey, you leave your mother out of this!

 

[SupaRubes]

Needs more description, especially Jay... what does he look like? what's he wearing? The city etc also need this a bit because currently, I just picture Blade Runner.

 

[Quality]

It's not a cyberpunk city. It's a bit more modern.

 

[Spawnkill69]

How much do you want for it?

 

[Quality]

Are you interested in buying my screenplay?

 

[Spawnkill69]

Yeah, can I check out the whole thing?

 

[Quality]

Well, it's not on the internet.

 

[Spawnkill69]

Could you send it to me badassproductions.tylerharris@gmail.com

 

[Quality]

Clearly to produce this would require a big budget and high VFX.

 

[Spawnkill69]

Probably

 

[Quality]

I can give you the synopsis.

 

[Spawnkill69]

Ok, send it through but why not send through the script, I have already given you notice that I have intent to buy that is all you need to provide in a courtroom that Mr. Tyler Harris asked for the screenplay with the intent to buy. You are fully covered by copyright laws.

If you could send both that would be cool.

 

[Quality]

I don't think it works like that.

 

[Spawnkill69]

It does

 

[Spawnkill69]

Let me know if you want to sell it. My email is badassproductions.tylerharris@gmail.com.

 

[indietalk]

Dude, you blast onto the scene with an email address, no history, and claim to want to buy all the screenplays on here without even reading them... slow down! You are looking like a scammer, act more professional and go about purchases the correct way if you are interested in one.

 

[Spawnkill69]

I read a bit of it, liked it, now I want to read it and discuss a purchase. Depending on the person some people look at as a hobby and some people want to do it for work. I just want to work.