watch My NEW Music Video!!! Check it out!!

[DannyP]

Check it out, and give ANY tips, concerns, critizicm, anything!! My friend AYOLO filmed it! He's looking for FEEDBACK FEEDBACK FEEDBACK!!!!

Thanks!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=/IxQ6K9gkYe8

 

[Zensteve]

Good effort, but inapproriate location & wardrobe don't help the performers sell it.

 

[rogypro]

it's still pretty good. good song too. maybe some color correction

 

[DannyP]

Good effort, but inapproriate location & wardrobe don't help the performers sell it.

appreciate the feedback, totally understand what you mean, it was just kind of a off-the-bat shoot.

it's still pretty good. good song too. maybe some color correction

Awesome, really appreciate it, and yea I totally understand what you mean!

 

[baoliun]

I have allergy to split screens,so am quite biased. As previous posters said changing locations/clothes/shots would make it much more interesting to watch.

 

[TwinCities]

I don't know what they're saying about the clothes, to be honest. Clothes are fine, fit the style of music. I liked it a lot, the way it's set up is pretty cool visually and it's artistic. I liked the locations because they stood out from normal locations you'd imagine a rap video to partake in, and different, in my eyes, is good.
Good material.

 

[DeJager]

I liked it as well. I'm also with TwinCities in that I don't know what the others mean when they say the wardrobe and location is inappropriate. It looks appropriate to me and fits the style of the video.

 

[DannyP]

I don't know what they're saying about the clothes, to be honest. Clothes are fine, fit the style of music. I liked it a lot, the way it's set up is pretty cool visually and it's artistic. I liked the locations because they stood out from normal locations you'd imagine a rap video to partake in, and different, in my eyes, is good.
Good material.

Wow really appreciate that! Means a lot!

I liked it as well. I'm also with TwinCities in that I don't know what the others mean when they say the wardrobe and location is inappropriate. It looks appropriate to me and fits the style of the video.

Again, means a lot, I'll forward on the comments to the director/filmer. Appreciate it!

 

[Cracker Funk]

You worked in a trumpet shot! Nice. To be honest, that shot seems random, but I gotta say you pulled it off nicely.

I actually kind of like the split-screen aesthetic. As is, though, I'm not really feeling much of a point behind it. I feel like it needs a central concept that glues the whole thing together, giving us a reason for the two screens, apart from it just being more alive (which isn't a bad reason, necessarily).

If this video were much longer, I would agree that the one location would get boring. As is, I think it works just fine, and you shot it nicely. Looks good.

 

[Zensteve]

I don't know what they're saying about the clothes, to be honest

I don't know what the others mean when they say the wardrobe and location is inappropriate

They is talkin' the talk', but not walkin' the walk.

The "keepin'-it-real" content of the song does not quite conjure up imagery of pasty white boys on the roof of a large house in what appears to be quiet, wooded suburbia.

That's what I was getting at.

 

[DannyP]

Thank you for the feedback everyone! Don't be scared to go all out and tell me what you really thought of the visual! Thanks again!