Hey indietalk - yeah I'm planning to try and do a 10 part series online, all animated. And yeah I got a lot of improving to doThanks for posting! Can you let us know what this is for? It looks like a lot of hard work went into it but my comments are:
If this is supposed to look realistic for the purposes of a film, it does not. If this is for a video game, then that's what it looks like. Also, the action looks pretty good except for the human movement. They don't move right. Also some anatomy issues just with the way hands appear etc. Best of luck!
Thanks Gary! The software is Maya. Lots more on the horizonWow, that was very compelling. Have so many questions (software etc.) but I like the animation and the storytelling. Music too all leading to a suspenseful end of the video. Very scary plot!