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archived-videos My first video...next Lucas?

The first 1:20 is about a minute too long. It's draggin'.

Picks up well after that. Cam-op needs a bit more practice at manual settings. Would have helped with that "running outside the window" part, where only the background is visible & all characters are silhouette.

Oh, the opening credits with the rake was quite creative, I thought.

Still a few stages away from Lucas-level, mind you. What's next?
 
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