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archived-videos My first short film "Stained"

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Very happy to be sharing my first completed short film! We started writing the story about 6 months ago, shot it in 3 days and spent about a month editing! Very excited to hear some feedback anyone might have, thank you!


"The depths of insanity are explored by a man who confronts an irremovable stain."
https://vimeo.com/194959619
 
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None I guess. You could have a cool scene where you're shopping at a office depot.

In all seriousness, I thought you did a good job.
 
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Nice, could be a very good information type of advertising, like "Don't loose your life for perfection, doesn't exist" or something similar. I liked it! Good job.
 
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