archived-videos My first short film about a psychopathic homosexual

Two days ago, I released my very first short film; it's a comedy. Let me know what you think!

View it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zghBi2Vwrus

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For a first short, that was pretty good!

A little slow in places, sound, needed tighter cutting, needed to be more creative etc... but pretty good effort. I watched it all the way through which is unusual for me.

Definitely promising!
 
Thanks

I appreciate your comments and support, I really do!
I do not like to use excuses, but as far as the "lack of creativity" I found it hard to
spend time working out creative shots, transitions and lighting with a zero dollar budget and
7 hours to shoot the entire thing. I will take your comments into consideration if I shoot another.

I'd like to return the favor... do you have anything you'd like me to view?

Thanks!
 
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