archived-videos My first animated Typography video. - Feedback?

[erikbakhshi]

Hi everyone. So I made my first typography video as a small part of a school project, and was just hoping for some feedback on it. What could have I done better? Any feedback is welcome! Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWQXAXrv9SA&list=UU6yumIbzj9k-_ksRSO-hlUA&index=1

 

[Pavelcz]

That red outline looks awful. Animation itself is fine.

 

[Zensteve]

Missing out on an opportunity to utilise patriotic colours & jingoistic background imagery.

Cool quote

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[rayw]

What could have I done better?

Chose a less ambiguous font. Something more "Americany" or timely to the quote.
Used more red, white, and blue or sepia.