watch "Lumen", Constructive criticism welcomed!

[Nismo]

What's up people? I've recently found this and another forum and am really grateful to see others out there working to become future hollywood producers and directors. lol Anyways I'm here to learn and share. This is a short I shot a while back, and as you'll notice I didn't have a stedicam or any kind of stabilizer at the time so please excuse the shakiness… Let me know what y'all think. Thanks!


http://youtu.be/77DxgzwvD_I?hd=1

 

[kinglis]

I enjoyed it... Good music, nice looking guy, my favorite T-shirt , the ending wasn't bad...

 

[Nismo]

lol Thanks! We're working on a continuation for that short…

 

[kinglis]

Can't wait to see it... Is the guy with the T-shirt in it? Just making sure

 

[Nismo]

lol Yeah, he's in it again… lol You're funny.

 

[DanGoloborodko]

I liked that a lot idk why but it gave me a surge of ideas. What equip/editing did you use this could really help

 

[Nismo]

Thanks man! I used my old Nikon D5000 with a 1.8 35mm. Editing was done in after effects.

 

[cmnervegna]

Nice. I enjoyed it. I subscribed to your channel. Look forward for more.

 

[Nismo]

Thanks for the support. I'll try to upload new stuff more often...

 

[Murdock]

I like the edit. But the effect isn't convincing. I think cause its omnipresent, if that makes sense. I mean its everywhere, no shadows.