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Length of Title

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Do you think that 6 words (which in my case is 8 syllables) too long to be a title?

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I think it just depends on the story you are telling. Sometimes a short mysterious/ambiguous title is good; other times a lengthy title is good. Take for example, Dr. Strangelove: Or how I learned to stop worrying, and love the bomb; it's one of the greatest black comedies ever and the title never hurt it. At least I don't think it did.
 
'Things to do in Denver when you're dead' can't be shortened particularly, nor can 'Don't be a menace in South Central when Drinking Your Juice in the Hood' which is one of the longest titles I know.

I don't think it really matters, although longer titles generally make me chuckle when they're clearly taking the piss.

What did you have in mind? People always find a way of shortening titles.
 
well as i said earlier i was thinking 6 words, 8 syllables. 'Don't be a menace in South Central when Drinking Your Juice in the Hood' is 14 words, 17 syllables so i guess my one aint that bad.
 
well as i said earlier i was thinking 6 words, 8 syllables. 'Don't be a menace in South Central when Drinking Your Juice in the Hood' is 14 words, 17 syllables so i guess my one aint that bad.

Your film's title is very important. It's the first impression people are going to get; if you are giving someone a spec script to read, and your title stinks, immediately they take their reading less seriously. If you are making a concept pitch, and someone loves your idea, and then you throw out an awful title, they feel like they've had the rug pulled out from under them. If you are already in the process of making your own film, you eventually want to get people to see it, and again, the title is the first thing they have to judge whether or not they want to see your film.

I would say it's all about getting it "just right", whatever that happens to be for your particular film. I think 6 words is probably borderline...if it works, it works. Five words probably has a better chance to work, but 6 just might fit your film exactly. If you go up to 7, your chances diminish even more, and by the time you get up to "Don't be a menace in South Central when Drinking Your Juice in the Hood", well people don't take you seriously anymore.

One or two word (one word and one particle) titles have impact. They're concise, they spell everything out right there for the potential movie-goer. If your film is called "Alien" or "The Terminator", people pretty much know what they are going to see. Or at least they have an expectation of what they are going to see, and this is not one time where you want to surprise the audience and catch them off guard. On the other hand, titles with 3-5 words offer intrigue...there may or may not be some clear insight to what the film is about, but there is some mystery there and intrigue that leads the movie-goer to say "hmm, that sounds interesting, I wonder what it's about?" Maybe they won't be hooked on the title, but they'll at least want to look up more information to see what your film is about, which is a pretty good start.

Sometimes that 3-5 range goes longer. Just thinking off the top of my head..."Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind" comes to, well, mind. Anyways, there's a 6 word title for you that works pretty well I'd say. But the more words you add, the more and more likely it is you can come up with something better. I saw these examples on Terry Rossio's blog:

Cop Tips Waitress Two Million Dollars became...It Could Happen To You
--Terry Rossio argues in his blog that the Cop title is more descriptive and the latter title is less memorable, but if you're going to be pounding out more than three words for a title, I'd contend you don't want description, you want the opposite, something catchy with intrigue.

My Posse Don't Do Homework became...Dangerous Minds
--Enough said.

Sometimes making the title longer is better:
Coma Guy became...While You Were Sleeping

If you have something edgy or unique, something that fits JUST RIGHT, one or two words are usually perfect. For action, thriller, horror it seems like short, impactful titles are a good call. Other films usually fall into that 3-5 category.

But, like 2 out of 3....6 ain't bad. If it's JUST RIGHT.

Hope this helps.
 
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I agree the title is very important. This is what will stick in someone's mind after they have read it.

It has to be relevant to the piece and if possible contain meaning.

Remember in Sideways the title of "the day after yesterday"? Which as the character said "today". Excellent. Stick in your mind because it is clever.

Also agree, if you have a poor title, it will get you off to a poor start.

For me the title is one of the first things I come up with. If I have trouble with a good title than I'm off to a bad start writing anything at all...
 
I don't think a lengthy title is really that annoying unless it is hard to pronounce the words ie. a tongue twister. Don't make the title, "Baby Billy Bumps Balls blah blah blah."
 
Borat: Cultural Learnings of America for Make Benefit Glorious Nation of Kazakhstan

and his next,

BrĂ¼no: Delicious Journeys Through America for the Purpose of Making Heterosexual Males Visibly Uncomfortable in the Presence of a Gay Foreigner in a Mesh T-Shirt
 
From what i have heard, many titles come after the script is written.

But as for titles, it depends totally on the movie and the perception of the title you think people will have.

If you are making the film and aren't planning on getting the word out until after its complete, you could give it a temporary title until you decide.

Sometimes brainstorming with others works too. If you are able to share the title you have in mind, maybe we can discuss it - however, if you dont want to do that quite yet, completely understandable.
 
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