I really enjoyed this, excellent story with an interesting message, which was executed well, nice framing, well paced, and the shots were very emotive. Although, one or two things to consider: the voice over was quite hard to hear in places which removed some emotional impact on the viewer, in my opinion anyway, and also some shaky camera work in places, but nothing to hinder on seriously. Overall good job
narration was a bit hard to hear understand. Easy enough to redo since its all narration. Have you considered a different voice actor for an ENGLISH release?.. no offense intended..