Here is what i'm hoping to be my last short. I doubt it will be but i can have dreams.
I am shooting two shorts before this so i have plenty of time to rewrite and rework things.
Let me know how I can improve the characters and overall story.
Does the overall element come out enough?
How can i make it better?
Love you all. Most of you. Some of you. Thanks in advance.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B5GtuZpQzN7EMDMzNzBmYjMtM2EwNC00ZWZlLThjOWEtYzU5OTYxMGZlMjMz
I am shooting two shorts before this so i have plenty of time to rewrite and rework things.
Let me know how I can improve the characters and overall story.
Does the overall element come out enough?
How can i make it better?
Love you all. Most of you. Some of you. Thanks in advance.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B5GtuZpQzN7EMDMzNzBmYjMtM2EwNC00ZWZlLThjOWEtYzU5OTYxMGZlMjMz