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archived-videos Joe in the Tunnel - documentary trailer

this seems like an interesting documentary but it definitely needs more interesting shots to be a trailer..but when you finish this id like to watch
 
I actually didn't think it moved slow at all, it kept a nice pace. I think you need to spend more time elaborating on what exactly you intend to accomplish for the viewer during the documentary, though. It's a cool idea, to have this "Joe in the Tunnel" going around and experiencing the graffiti, and cataloging it, but that couldn't hold me for more than a couple minutes. Documentaries need to have a mission to fulfill by the end, in my opinion.
 
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