I'm thinking that i have 2/3 of a film and I might have missed to include the first buildup scenes what do you guys think?
SCARED.
- A boy who is sad, alone wants a way out
- Bullies pick on him at school.
- Boy buys a gun
- Goes to kill his bully, but instead shoots himself in front of the bully
Introduction
[Boy in an empty classroom gets up and walks out of class to go home]
[Boy rides a bus home]
[Boy walks up to his house and inside, then to his bedroom and pictures himself with a gun instead of a toothbrush and puts it to his head]
SCARED TITLE APPEARS
Counselors Room
[Boy talks to counselor about how his grades have dropt, how he’s always been a good student maybe he’s having family problems, then it cuts to his house life]
Home Reception
[Gets home and gets yelled at by his father, boy talks back to his father and his father chases him to him room but the boy locks the door]
Counselor Room Continued
[Boy tells the councilor everything’s great at home]
Beaten
[Boy ends convo with councilor and walks out]
[Boy gets chased by bullies]
[Boy gets beaten up by bullies]
The Choice
[When walking home stops at a roads intersection with two signs at both sides of the street, one says by drugs, other says buy gun]
[Boy takes a second looks at both and the way he came and decides to go with the gun path]
[Then follows a number of directional signs to a gun dealer and buys one]
The Next Night!
[Sits in bed and smiles while holding up the gun]
[Gets up later that night, before he leaves his house he goes into the kitchen and picks up a knife]
[Goes to the bullies house]
[Chases the bully around the house with a knife]
[Stabs the bullies in the leg with the knife]
[Points the gun at the bully and then to himself]
[Slow-mo of the bully jumping towards Semir trying to stop him from shooting himself]
[Slow-mo of Semir hearing voices in his head and flashback of things that have happened]
[Then shoots himself]
SCARED.
SCARED.
- A boy who is sad, alone wants a way out
- Bullies pick on him at school.
- Boy buys a gun
- Goes to kill his bully, but instead shoots himself in front of the bully
Introduction
[Boy in an empty classroom gets up and walks out of class to go home]
[Boy rides a bus home]
[Boy walks up to his house and inside, then to his bedroom and pictures himself with a gun instead of a toothbrush and puts it to his head]
SCARED TITLE APPEARS
Counselors Room
[Boy talks to counselor about how his grades have dropt, how he’s always been a good student maybe he’s having family problems, then it cuts to his house life]
Home Reception
[Gets home and gets yelled at by his father, boy talks back to his father and his father chases him to him room but the boy locks the door]
Counselor Room Continued
[Boy tells the councilor everything’s great at home]
Beaten
[Boy ends convo with councilor and walks out]
[Boy gets chased by bullies]
[Boy gets beaten up by bullies]
The Choice
[When walking home stops at a roads intersection with two signs at both sides of the street, one says by drugs, other says buy gun]
[Boy takes a second looks at both and the way he came and decides to go with the gun path]
[Then follows a number of directional signs to a gun dealer and buys one]
The Next Night!
[Sits in bed and smiles while holding up the gun]
[Gets up later that night, before he leaves his house he goes into the kitchen and picks up a knife]
[Goes to the bullies house]
[Chases the bully around the house with a knife]
[Stabs the bullies in the leg with the knife]
[Points the gun at the bully and then to himself]
[Slow-mo of the bully jumping towards Semir trying to stop him from shooting himself]
[Slow-mo of Semir hearing voices in his head and flashback of things that have happened]
[Then shoots himself]
SCARED.