In need for a critical script reader!

[ingis95]

Hey!
I just finished the first draft of my awareness short-film.
It is about depression and what it does to us, how we can prevent it and what mainly causes it.
I have a script on about 10 pages that I would love someone to read and comment on, giving me structured feedback on how I can improve it and so on.
I would love to do critical reading for YOUR script in return.
If interessted please leave me a note here on the forum or just send me a private message!

Thank you in advance!

 

[FantasySciFi]

I'm willing to read through it and provide feedback.

 

[QualityHD]

Right here^^

 

[insert_cliche_here]

I do actually know a lot about depressive disorders and whatnot, I'd be happy to give it a read

 

[knightly]

How critical do you want it read? I'll give it a go if you'd like, but I've been told my notes (although not toned harshly) tend to be so thorough that people think I'm just tearing them apart.

 

[maralyn]

(So.... he'll help you get in touch with any depressive order you may have otherwise never known you had)

 

[knightly]

(So.... he'll help you get in touch with any depressive order you may have otherwise never known you had)

It has certainly seemed to be the case in the past.