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archived-videos In her shadow -short

I thought it was great.

The intrigue held all the way to the end.
I like the pace of the action in most of the scenes, it’s not rushed.
The coffee house scene is a great bit of acting.
Opening shots are nice.
The long hall and final sequence are visually interesting.

The lighting could have been better in some scenes.
The blonde could have been crazier in the nightmare.
I wish the final sequence had a cold surreal dream like blue tint to it.

Overall- Very sweet short.

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