Sorry for not having posted in a while ,life's caught up to me a little so I've been a little quiet about films for the last few months. But my names Dom, I am a 15 year old filmmaker from north wales, I specialise in music as a bassist and guitarist and all of my films are made purely with an Iphone. I recently had an idea for a film (and if I have a good idea, I will almost always try to interpret it into a film) So here's my film, it has religious undertones (to Lucifer and the "Light of the lord", I'm not religious myself but I thought it would make for a fascinating story) and its a semi-psychological horror. Ill leave out explaining the story as id like the film to do that. But id like to know if this would make the cut for a film festival? I feel like I might be missing something when it comes to festivals (what do judges etc look for in a film? I understand the basics when it comes to this but feel as though somethings hiding from me I cant put my finger on ). I want your thoughts and opinions on this film. What did you think in terms of clarity, cinematograph and of the like, I would like to know what I can improve in terms of story clarity (this has been the main criticism of many of my films) . Thanks once again, Ill make sure to post more often from now on haha
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b83gFrjIYZc&lc=z223cbtzmwufdnwveacdp43aekrspeippvbdolup3j5w03c010c
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b83gFrjIYZc&lc=z223cbtzmwufdnwveacdp43aekrspeippvbdolup3j5w03c010c