I have started writing a screenplay, and I have a few scenes done so I want to get some feedback on the prologue I wrote. Here's a brief synopsis of the story and a logline for the prologue.
Title: The Forest of the Poor
If you are interested in reading the prologue here is a direct link. The prologue is 7 pages (1 title page + 6 pages) and shouldn't take more than 20 minutes to read.
Thanks for all of your help!
Title: The Forest of the Poor
The Forest of the Poor tells the story of two men incarcerated during investigations into two separate missing persons cases.
Prologue: Charlie is aboard a train headed for the Redding Institute for the Criminally Suspect.
If you are interested in reading the prologue here is a direct link. The prologue is 7 pages (1 title page + 6 pages) and shouldn't take more than 20 minutes to read.
Thanks for all of your help!
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