You don't need a budget for a better story. And you'd probably benefit by decreasing the amount of action to a minimum.
So they say. However, science fiction does cost money to achieve the right look to reach out to the science fiction fans around the globe.[/URL]
You do NOT need money to tell a good sci-fi story. What you need is a good sci-fi story. Besides, the "look" you've acheived does not require any money. In all honesty, I think you could re-assess your spending habits. The same movie can be made on a MUCH smaller budget.
Heck, here's my honest opinion -- your sequel should be a comedy. Give it a "Laser Cats" treatment. Make it on a nothing budget, and have fun with it. Tell the same story, but don't take it so seriously (because your audience isn't).
"I, Creator 2", made in the style of "Laser Cats" -- that's a movie I would want to watch.
http://www.nbc.com/saturday-night-live/video/laser-cats/2925/
I think (From an artistic (Sci Fi) and financial stand point) you could team up with fellow New Yorker (And Indietalk member) The Opus Fuller, and together make a powerhouse film for a fraction of the Very Special Agents budget.
-Thanks-
I can't understand the dialogue and the FX/dialogue/music mix is way out of balance.
I can give you further advice if you want it...
I agree I think you spent too much on this film. The lighting needs some work. I have seen some much lower budget stuff on here that looks way better. Maybe get a better crew next time. Not sure if it was just lighting and sound. What camera did you use? I think better lighting would help a lot. Let others chime in here.
If you can get a more experienced/talented crew next time that probably would help a lot. Otherwise learn about 3 point lighting and get better sound equipment and that should help. I messed up the light on my film too and probably worse than yours. So don't fell alone here. Some cameras are more forgiving than others as far as poor lighting. The larger the sensor the camera has the better is my understanding. What camera did your DP use?
Listening to the audio it sounds like you are clipping out in some areas where the audio is above 0 db and then distorts. Not sure if it is that or if it was poor recording of the mic. Check you mix and make sure they are no too hot and distorting in places.
Yeah finding the right crew is the hard part. I agree finding a good dp and lighting crew is difficult. But if you network with other indie film makers and check out there films before hiring them that helps. Learning how to light yourself would help too. There is some cheap methods on this forum that sound promising for DIY lighting.
Did the budget come out of pocket or did you round up some investors?
Also, Nobody can really argue with you. I mean you did finish a feature film in the end off it all... Grats
to you on that.
Did the budget come out of pocket or did you round up some investors?
Also, Nobody can really argue with you. I mean you did finish a feature film in the end off it all... Grats
to you on that.
I agree congrats on doing your feature film it is all a learning experience and hopefully leads to better and better films. Don't get discouraged. We are just tyring to help you make better films and to improve this one.
The ideas of the film reminds me of BSG. Which I am a fan of Sci Fi. It also reminds me of Terminator in some ways. So I can see kinda where this film may be heading. I also see that she was made. So maybe Weird Science was an inspiration too.
Have you considered re-doing some of the worst audio in post via dubing (looping they call it). Not sure your actors are available to do that.
Did the budget come out of pocket or did you round up some investors?
Also, Nobody can really argue with you. I mean you did finish a feature film in the end off it all... Grats
to you on that.
Sorry,
But that was crap. The first I, Creator had a story with social value. And, the sequel will also have social value with a stronger story. The first one also had interesting characters. Some will return in the sequel along with interesting new characters.
Is this the same OpusFuller who wrote a lengthy post telling me the ways he thought I was screwing up production of my feature?
Modern Day Myth, OpusFuller is correct, however, to offer congrats -- finishing a feature is a tremendous accomplishment. Cheers to you for that.