Dear indietalk users,
After a long haitus, I decided to take it upon myself to write my own screenplay to direct. However, as of right now I don't think it's that great, and I want some feedback in order to make it better. I feel as though it starts out okay but loses ground story-wise after the first few pages. I also think that my formatting and description could use some work as well.
LOG-LINE: A pair of siblings must fight for survival and hope in a post-apocalyptic world that has been torn apart by infection.
I don't know if this is the proper way to do this, by my screenplay can be found here: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2L5pZGjvksnRi1tUzNPNTdjV1U/edit#
I'd appreciate any help you guys could give. I really do want to see this script work out and I'll do anything to make it better.
After a long haitus, I decided to take it upon myself to write my own screenplay to direct. However, as of right now I don't think it's that great, and I want some feedback in order to make it better. I feel as though it starts out okay but loses ground story-wise after the first few pages. I also think that my formatting and description could use some work as well.
LOG-LINE: A pair of siblings must fight for survival and hope in a post-apocalyptic world that has been torn apart by infection.
I don't know if this is the proper way to do this, by my screenplay can be found here: https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2L5pZGjvksnRi1tUzNPNTdjV1U/edit#
I'd appreciate any help you guys could give. I really do want to see this script work out and I'll do anything to make it better.
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