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archived-vidoes Hypnagogia

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I like your trailer. I saw it before and liked it then as well.
It looks like a cool and ambitious film that I would watch, but in this trailer the VO just bothers me in terms of timing and content.

I’m guessing its dialogue VO, and it’s not bad, but it just doesn’t feel like it has a punch to it.
When I hear his voice I want to be like “Oh damn this looks nuts!” and be intrigued and primed with anticipation in a horror/thriller film kind of way.

It begins to do that, but to me just doesn’t follow through in cadence and hook.
It feels like it could be “Jimmy So and So once told me, ‘In this world there’s a fine line between what is real and what isn’t... once you wake up’.” OR "..That is... once you wake up."

-Thanks-
 
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