Thanks, I thought of the break as well with the music, and it could work. Well my script is too long, and I am trying to cut it down by an 8th, about.
The long explanation is one character explaining to another how he is going to hack into the bank records, and move put some things in other characters accounts, and how this will help flush out who the person is that they are looking for. It takes some explaining so it makes sense, but since I should show and not tell, do you think the audience will get such a thing if I show it?
All he does is look up some bank accounts and I would have to close up on some transactions, but not sure if the audience will put it together as to what's going on, without a verbal explanation to another character.