How do you know if your movie is too loud or quiet?
If the festival is screening in a cinema, you need to mix in a theatrically calibrated mix room. There is NO other way!
I decided to redo quite a few of them but had to turn the volume up just a bit louder, in order to overpower the original sound effects, or at least to the point where you are not paying attention to the originals. Can this cause a problem volume wise ...
Depends, was it mix in a theatrically calibrated mix room to start with? If so, then yes it could cause a problem, if not, then it's anyone's guess!
Presumably for budget reasons, it very much sounds like whoever did the audio-post for the short did not have a theatrically calibrated mixing environment, or even a particularly professional attitude (going only on your side of the story!). So the answer to your original question ("How do you know if your movie is too loud or quiet?") is: You can't! There simply isn't any no budget indie tricks or workarounds!!
Personally it does not sound too loud for the speakers in my opinion.
What speakers? Unless you have a calibrated theatrical sound system, whether it sounds too loud for your speakers is utterly irrelevant. It's a rather silly question and statement, as you should know by now! It's like asking what is the correct throttle pedal position and then stating that 3/4 of the way to the floor feels OK in your car. This is a silly question for two reasons: 1. 3/4 of the way down might be anything from about 50mph to over 150mph depending on your car and 2. What feels OK on the highway would be dangerously fast in a residential area but in a Formula 1 race would be comically slow. Unless you have a throttle pedal calibrated to MPH, there is no way to know where it should be in your car!
Furthermore, the correct loudness is only one part of the equation, the frequency response of a theatrical sound system is going to be wildly different from the frequency response of your system. So regardless of whether the loudness is correct (or even "in the ball park") it's still going to sound very different and therefore you've got no idea whether the edits which sound OK on your system are going to also sound OK on a theatrical system or whether they are going to sound ridiculous.
From there I could turn any parts of the movie down, that cross over - 6 ...
Which would achieve absolutely nothing, zip! Most of what AcousticAl stated is fairly good advice/information however, what he said about levels was particularly inaccurate. The average dialogue level range he suggests would be far too high even for TV broadcast specs, let alone theatrical sound!!
I think I've told you before, the Decibel (dB) scale measures energy, it does NOT measure or give even a rough indication of how loud something is. You need to get this into your head and stop trying to make up ridiculous rules!! Average theatrical dialogue levels are likely to be anywhere from below -40dB to as high as -14dB or so and average mix levels anywhere from about -70dB to about -1dB. These dB ranges are far too wide to be of any practical use when mixing and that's why they are NEVER used! And, just for the record, the output level of a whisper (as measured in dB), can actually be as high or even higher than a shout.
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