I came up with an idea to make a short film about a college girl who gets out of class at night and as she's walking to her car she notices someone is following her and attempts to kill her. The scene would be about 3-4 minutes long I have no budget but only 3 cams and a Campus for the scene. Does this scene I'm contemplating on writing seem to vague and just boring or should i add more depth to it...Ive never actually wrote a script just always behind the camera and opinions on how to make this Film a better one id greatly appreciate it