I agree that it's a bit long. Plus, the editing is kind of all over the place. Reels should showcase your work, showing a section of one scene, then the next, then the next... Yours seems to be a mash-up of several things at once.
If you're looking to just show the various looks you were after, it works, but to show that you know shot composition and have the ability to tell a story, I would re-edit...