If you have never seen ANNA AND THE KING, I highly recommend it. That is good reference for what you are trying to write.
Thanks I will definitely read the script. I have written only the treatment . It is about the white wives . Indian Rajas those time had in their Zenana many wives . I read about an Indian prince falling in love with a spanish dancer and I just want to write it .
However as I do not want any copywright problems I choose Three white women marrying Indian princes . I want to show their lifestyle and their wealth . Their happiness and misery . It is three different stories.
This is fiction . I want to gel it .
I am pasting my sample treatment As the ship approaches the Port we can see Bombay . The western Ghats a range of mountains bordered it .Groves of Cocunut and Palm trees can be seen.
The ship is anchored . Custom officials come in . Angela her maid and her companion alights
She is taken in a Palanquin beared by four servants to the Hotel .
The Raja’s Minister comes down and meets her and puts her at the Hotel
She is received by the Rajah’s assistant
She dresses up for the occasion
The maid rubs her body with oil and bathes her with milk and water .the dress her with a red saree Her feet is ordained with red slippers embroidered with gold thread. Pearl necklaces and bracelets ordained her body. .
On the elephants back is the howdah which is like a throne and Angela is made to sit on it. Her jewels els and veil is adjusted
The princess is asked to sit cross legged but as a westerner she finds it difficult
So she sits akwrdly and his makes people laugh . but the rajah quells it with his looks
Angela slightly open her curtain and see a crod of people shouting Jai and chanting prayers
The next day he introduces her to his other two wives . The Princess is surprised .
She ask him why she is not told . The Raja told that he informed her parents . However he had fallen in love with her , so he married her.
The Princess lies in her bed and cries . The companion consoles her and says as long she has the Raja ‘s love nothing is the problem.
This is about the first wife
In ACT ii
The lady looks down the native Indians .She dances with others and this is resented by the husband .
While climbing the elephant seat she breaks her thigh bone she curses with hate S
She always looked at the mirror and admired her beauty and other ladies will laugh
She pushed the prince’s son while it tried to sit on her telling I hate children , This angers the RAJMATA .and she slapped her . Stella tried to slap but the prince stopped her and hit her soundly
She dances on the table after consuming liquor .The prince walks away and the native servants laughs at her .
Princess next day comforts him with loving endearments .
I also want to show the III lady . However I want it to gel and this is really a bit tough. pl help and thanks
padma