Hi guys, I’m new to film making and we are shooting my next project the weekend of July 29th I’m proud of our script, but I’m clueless with the shot list because of everything going on. I know I’m asking a lot but could please take a look at my script and create a shot list for scene 13. EXT. FIELD PARTY – NIGHT. This scene has a lot going on and I want to do it right!
Thanks,
Bruce
12. INT. JAKE'S CAR - NIGHT
Jake speeds into the field parking area, looking from side to side as if he is looking for Alice's car as he drives past parked cars.
Three people catch his eye standing at a parked car.
They appear to him as zombies feeding from a person on the ground while looking back over his shoulder he hears THUMP as his car runs over something. Rides over a BUMP. Jake slams the brakes.
JAKE
Oh No!
cut to
13. EXT. FIELD PARTY - NIGHT
Jake gets out and runs around the car and finds a body underneath.
Jake looks around to see if anyone has noticed.
He turns back to see a leg moving. Jake slides the body out from under the car, a zombie emerges.
Jake falls back scared and scrambles to his feet.
As he turns to run, he sees a group of zombies moving towards him from the parked car.
Panicking, Jake runs towards the bonfire and away from the crowd of perusing zombies.
He sees zombies and dead bodies on blankets everywhere, he sees his girlfriend on a blanket, fighting off a zombie on top of her.
Jake struggles to get a golf club away from a zombie.
He smashes the club with all of his strength into the zombies skull and runs to help his girlfriend.
With the golf club, Jake hits the zombie on the back of the head and fights the zombie off his girlfriend. While struggling with the zombie his girlfriend runs away.
JAKE
Alice! It's me!
Three zombies approach Jake from behind.
He sees the zombies just as they were right behind him. Jake smashes the first zombie in the head with the golf club.
Once the first zombie goes down, Jake smashes the other two zombies, one at a time.
As he begins to walk away, he notices one of the zombies continues to squirm around on the ground.
Jake goes back and finishes off the zombie, leaving the golf club on the ground next to the now lifeless zombie.
JAKE
Alice! Alice!
Jake hears a scream. He turns to see his girlfriend surrounded by zombies. One of the zombies is Steve.
JAKE
Oh no, not you too.
Jake runs back and picks up the golf club and turns back to rescue his girlfriend.
As he approaches Alice, he sees police cars pull up behind him.
JAKE
(Yelling back towards the police officers)
Help, Zombies are everywhere.
As Jake turns back towards his girlfriend, he is tackled to the ground, hitting his head going unconscious.
The two police officers handcuff Jake; they grab him by the arms, lifts him up, and drags him to the police car. One officer shoves him in the back of the car and the other officer slams the door.
Police car drives away.
Thanks,
Bruce
12. INT. JAKE'S CAR - NIGHT
Jake speeds into the field parking area, looking from side to side as if he is looking for Alice's car as he drives past parked cars.
Three people catch his eye standing at a parked car.
They appear to him as zombies feeding from a person on the ground while looking back over his shoulder he hears THUMP as his car runs over something. Rides over a BUMP. Jake slams the brakes.
JAKE
Oh No!
cut to
13. EXT. FIELD PARTY - NIGHT
Jake gets out and runs around the car and finds a body underneath.
Jake looks around to see if anyone has noticed.
He turns back to see a leg moving. Jake slides the body out from under the car, a zombie emerges.
Jake falls back scared and scrambles to his feet.
As he turns to run, he sees a group of zombies moving towards him from the parked car.
Panicking, Jake runs towards the bonfire and away from the crowd of perusing zombies.
He sees zombies and dead bodies on blankets everywhere, he sees his girlfriend on a blanket, fighting off a zombie on top of her.
Jake struggles to get a golf club away from a zombie.
He smashes the club with all of his strength into the zombies skull and runs to help his girlfriend.
With the golf club, Jake hits the zombie on the back of the head and fights the zombie off his girlfriend. While struggling with the zombie his girlfriend runs away.
JAKE
Alice! It's me!
Three zombies approach Jake from behind.
He sees the zombies just as they were right behind him. Jake smashes the first zombie in the head with the golf club.
Once the first zombie goes down, Jake smashes the other two zombies, one at a time.
As he begins to walk away, he notices one of the zombies continues to squirm around on the ground.
Jake goes back and finishes off the zombie, leaving the golf club on the ground next to the now lifeless zombie.
JAKE
Alice! Alice!
Jake hears a scream. He turns to see his girlfriend surrounded by zombies. One of the zombies is Steve.
JAKE
Oh no, not you too.
Jake runs back and picks up the golf club and turns back to rescue his girlfriend.
As he approaches Alice, he sees police cars pull up behind him.
JAKE
(Yelling back towards the police officers)
Help, Zombies are everywhere.
As Jake turns back towards his girlfriend, he is tackled to the ground, hitting his head going unconscious.
The two police officers handcuff Jake; they grab him by the arms, lifts him up, and drags him to the police car. One officer shoves him in the back of the car and the other officer slams the door.
Police car drives away.